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About Me Member Fantasy Writer vmaverik23/Male/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 5 Years
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USMC Semper Fi!

Tue Feb 1, 2005, 8:29 AM
Decided to enlist in hte marines, won't be back for three months. Take care and Good luck to all!

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Devious Info

  • Current Residence: Cali: Bay Area
  • Interests: Weapons Training, writing, movies, women
  • Favourite movie: Boondock saints, Spider-man
  • Favourite genre of music: Anything except country
  • Operating System: Win
  • Favourite game: Hitman 1 & 2, Tenchu: stealth assassins
  • Favourite gaming platform: PS2
  • Favourite cartoon character: Road Runner
  • Personal Quote: Reality is a cage, imagination is the key that sets you free
  • Tools of the Trade: Brains and will/determination

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:iconremote-spook:
You'll do great things and I can't wait to tell everyone about my Marine buddy. Write me!

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~gothickitty-agent101 my twinny!

~HeardButNotSeen and i'm in here tee hee
:iconmandychan4ever:
mind if i watch? ^_^

splode: XD

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"When will the world listen to reason? When will the truth come into season? I have a feeling it will be a long time."

"I am like you...I have no name."
:iconsplode:
no prob! good stuff that is! and thanks. mandychan is a good friend of mine, she got me on here. just so ya know!

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:iconanotheruglygirl:
thank you for the comment.
:iconvmaverik:
You're welcome. Smile! It's illegal for pretty women to frown in my world.
:icononewordatatime:
You are a good writer. Having looked at what you’ve done so far, I know that you’ve got some really brilliant ideas in that head of yours, and those ideas will take you far if you ever choose writing as a profession. You have a knack for describing things, and with the exception of a few bland words, you make use of pretty good word choice as well. You also have the unique ability to tell us a wealth of information about a character in just a few short paragraphs, which is an ability that is often beyond some writers. You should be proud of that. However, you do have some downfalls. Your biggest is in punctuation. I noticed you often leave out commas, in places where they could be really useful to combine similar sentences to make reading easier. Also, you often leave out commas when doing dialogue between characters, which can make things very confusing for the casual reader if you’re not careful. I noted also that you don’t always use good sentence structure. On some occasions you split sentences up when they shouldn’t have been, while on others you ran them together when they would have sounded better apart. However, these are all downfalls that are easily overcome with practice and patience. Rome wasn’t burned in a day :D . Keep at it. You have some real talent and, with a little time and practice, I think you could go far.

:butterflytwo:

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At your service.
:icondarkcrescendo:
Thank you for the watch.

I hope you enjoy yourself!

Benedictions

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There is no escape from metre; there is only mastery.
- T.S. Eliot 'Reflections on Vers Libre' 1917 [link]
:iconangres:
Uhm..........RAR!

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Wit is educated insolence.
-Aristotle
:iconvmaverik:
ACCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCK! ::hides::

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